The haunted house

                                  This is my haunted house writing, we had to write about a time we where scared or make up a time that would be scary.
I am working on organisation and punctuation. I think I have completed organisation because I have used paragraphs and for punctuation I think I was ok with punctuation but I think I could have done better by adding more commas explanation marks and lots others.

One day Pania came over to Frankie’s house. Mum Frankie’s house looks creepy do I have to go Pania said yes you do replied her mum come on let’s go. They jumped out of their red car and walked to the door. Frankies mum opened the door and said hi. The two mums talked for the next 5 minutes. Then Frankie came down. They went and played until it was 8.30pm it was now time to go to sleep.

They went to bed and fell asleep but at 12pm at night someone woke Pania up. Frankie who was that Pania whispered. What do you mean i’m trying to sleep Frankie quietly replied. I swear someone or something just kicked my leg. Whatever just go to sleep Frankie replied.Pania could not sleep so she investigated by herself.

She got out of bed and turned on the light. She saw a white ghost looking thing staring at her. She screamed. Frankie got up to see what all the fuss was about. She looked up and screamed they both saw the ghost. The parents jumped out of bed and they went to check on them and they saw the ghost to. They were very scared they did not know what to do. They have never seen a ghost before. So the next day they went and sold the house and brought a new one. They never saw a ghost again, but Pania never went back to anyone’s house ever again.